支离破碎的

1.A lack of narrative drive leaves the reader with piecemeal vignettes.

述缺乏吸引力，读者读到的只是一些支离破碎的片段。

2.It often happens that the real tragedies of life occur in such an inartistic manner that they hurt us by their crude violence, their absolute incoherence.

生活中真正的悲剧经常以非艺术的形式发生，所以它那种粗野的暴力，环节上的支离破碎都会伤害我的感情。